I must say, as significantly as I enjoyed reading what you had to say, I
couldnt help but lose interest after a while. Its as if you had a fantastic grasp to the subject matter,
but you forgot to include your readers. Perhaps
you should think about this from a lot more than 1 angle.
Or maybe you shouldnt generalise so much. Its better if
you think about what others may have to say instead of just going for a gut reaction to the topic.
Think about adjusting your personal thought process and giving others who
may read this the benefit of the doubt.